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IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft
more than 1350 pages, well meant, but that is too much. I suggest
that the final draft should be shortened, with a factor 2. This
request is made earlier (FOD). May I suggest that the total IPCC-
2007, beautifully illustrated and well documented should
encompass not more than 2000 pages and should then be
simultaneously published as PDF on internet on the IPCC Website
for perusal of all interested persons on this world! That means a lot
of work to done soon!!
(Robbert Misdorp, Ministry of Transport and Public Works)
SPM-50 0 A 0 0 0 0 2) Concerning the contents of IPPC-WG3: “It should be
concentrated on the positive side, on the implementation: not on the
uncertainties, but directed towards harmony with our direct natural
surroundings (=statements of the mothers). And that’s why we
should undertake all these our efforts.“
Above means that the total IPCC-2007 Report should be readable.
A beautiful job is done so far, an enormous amount of data is
gathered, information is provided … but for whom?
For the scientists to further investigate or for the decision makers to
implement pro-active, mitigating, urgent measures to reduce GHG
emissions?
(Robbert Misdorp, Ministry of Transport and Public Works)
SPM-51 0 A 0 0 0 0 It is better to refer to the work completed recently by the World
Energy Council who charged the ADEME and ENERDATA
(ODYSSEE) to count the best practices as regards energy
efficiency and clean technologies for the reduction of the GHG
emissions at the European level.
(Néjib Osman, Durable et l'Environnement - CIEDE
Agence Nationale pour la Maîtrise de l'Energie)
SPM-52 0 A 0 0 0 0 Concerning the energy projections, several models were quoted to
establish the projection of energy demand with medium and long
terms. It would be also recommended to resort to the model
Medpro-environment conceived by ENERDATA who at the same
time allows to project the energy demand and the emissions of
GHG.
Expert Review of Second-Order-Draft
Confidential, Do Not Cite or Quote
Response suggested by cochairs
Shorten report all
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NOT FOR SPM 4-10
NOT FOR SPM 1,4-10
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