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IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft
A 2 1 2 0 Figure SPM 1 - Chart should clarify that the Montreal Protocol
(MP) gases are not included. Chart does not need to include the
MP gases. U.S. Government
(Government of U.S. Department of State)
B 2 1 2 0 The units on the ordinant of Figure SPM.1 should use of GtCO2-eq
as more common unit. U.S. Government
(Government of U.S. Department of State)
B 2 1 2 0 Figure SPM.1 Move the y-axis label. It’s in a confusing place.
U.S. Government
(Government of U.S. Department of State)
B 2 1 2 0 Fig SPM 1 - Chart should clarify that the Montreal Protocol gases
are not included. Chart does not need to include the MP gases.
U.S. Government
(Government of U.S. Department of State)
B 2 1 2 0 Explain what radiative forcing is. It is used extensively and
importantly in Table SPM.1 and Figures SPM. 4 and SPM.5. Also
define in glossary. U.S. Government
(Government of U.S. Department of State)
A 2 3 2 3 Clarity: explain what “sustainable production” means. U.S.
Government
(Government of U.S. Department of State)
B 2 3 2 3 Define “sustainable production.” U.S. Government
(Government of U.S. Department of State)
A 2 4 2 5 The definitions of 2) and 3) should be interchanged
(Government of France)
A 2 6 2 0 Fig. SPM 1; Footnote – 4 for figure – “include large-scale clearing
by burning biomass”. This is not necessarily true. In many
countries timber is harvested for commercial export, leading to
GHG emissions.
(1.)can GHG emissions from deforestation be separated from
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ACC 1 See comment
SPM-178
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ACC 1 ACC
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ACC 1 ACC
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Identical A-181 1 ACC
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TIA; radiative forcing will be
dropped
in fig SPM4 and 5, but not in
table 1
Not applicable
for Chapter 1
but should not
be dropped
ACC; clarify fn 1 ACC
(Rick/Niclas)
ACC; clarify fn 1 ACC
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CHECK 1 ACC
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ACC; clarify fn 4 1 Check
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