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IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft
924 overcome the strong barriers to capturing the economic mitigation
potential in the building sector, a coherent set of policies is
required".
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(Government of Japan)
18 A 13 10 0 0 Add an example of the barriers faced
(Ann Gardiner, AEA Technology)
18 B 13 10 13 0 Change “capturing the economic mitigation potential” to “realizing
potential emission reduction opportunities”. The assessment
should not imply that emissions reductions are an “all or nothing
choice” with a decision to be made between achieving “the”
potential or doing nothing. U.S. Government
(Government of U.S. Department of State)
18 A 13 11 0 0 I suggest to add: "Encouraging development of ESCOs might help
accelarating improvements in the sctor for which transaction costs
are high."
(Jacques Rilling, CSTB Building Research Center)
18 A 13 11 13 0 The new transport pathes between new neibourghood in
metropolitan areas have a crucial effect in the growth of fuel
consume and policies to minimazie that effect must be added to the
mitigation policies.
(Government of Spain)
18 B 13 11 13 11 Third party financing should be mentioned here as an important
way to overcome the barriers.
(Jean-Pascal van YPERSELE, Université catholique de Louvain
(Belgium))
19 A 13 15 13 15 Although this is arguably covered by "fuel shifts", you may want to
add "shift from fossil fuels towards electricity" as in industry this
shift is often associated with important efficiency improvements,
while it also gives more possibilities for decarbonising the energy
sources.
Expert Review of Second-Order-Draft
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by the writing
team
ACC; add a few words . No space. If
space is given,
we can, but it
will take 3 extra
lines.
ACC; replace “capturing” by
“realising”
DISCUSS
If literature on ESCO’s is
showing effectiveness, then add
this to SPM
UNCLEAR
REJ; too detailed for SPM
DISCUSS Is this an important
option?
(6)
(6)
done.
(6)
6 ESCOs added
(6)
7 Too general a
statement.
Depends on
specifics
(7)
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