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IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft
the notion of "Technical potential". This expression is defined in
the Glossary in reference to technologies that have "already been
demonstrated", which contradicts the clause "provided that a range
of mitigation technologies is further developed". Please clarify.
(Jean-Pascal van YPERSELE, Université catholique de Louvain
(Belgium))
B 5 3 5 6 Strike clause “provided a range of….implimented” or alternatively
include a more detailed discussion of cost. U.S. Government.
(Government of U.S. Department of State)
B 5 3 5 6 Delete reference to “uncertainty” on line 6. U.S. Government
(Government of U.S. Department of State)
A 5 4 5 5 This sentence should refer to peaking and subsequent dropping of
emissiosn, not only peaking.
(Harald Winkler, University of Cape Town)
A 5 4 5 4 Add after "implemented", "by enhancing policies and measusres,
associated with proper demand control." Reason:Thoughout this
WGIII Report, it is well recognized that techonological solution
only is not at all the panacea but needs strong policy to implement.
And many scenarios indroduced here such as SRES-B1clearly
show some kind of social system change is far more effective than
the techno-fixed society. SPM should be more careful not to over
enphasize the techno fix solutions.
(Shuzo Nishioka, National Institute for Environmental Studies)
A 5 4 0 0 suggest to add to "implemented", "and also that a change in
consumption patterns occurs."
(Faouzi Senhaji, I.A.V. Hassan II (GERERE))
Expert Review of Second-Order-Draft
Confidential, Do Not Cite or Quote
Response suggested by cochairs
TIA; heading text to be deleted,
but wording to be used for
merging with para 6
TIA; heading text to be deleted,
but wording to be used for
merging with para 7
TIA; heading text to be deleted,
but wording to be used for
merging with para 5
REJ; too detailed
REJ; not needed
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