SODBatch A&B SPM Comments co-chair response final ... - ipcc-wg3
SODBatch A&B SPM Comments co-chair response final ... - ipcc-wg3
SODBatch A&B SPM Comments co-chair response final ... - ipcc-wg3
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Chapter-<br />
Comment<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
316<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
317<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
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<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
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para<br />
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<strong>Comments</strong><br />
IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Se<strong>co</strong>nd Order Draft<br />
4 A 4 19 4 23 for clarity please rephrase to: "There has been a substantial increase<br />
in formulating policies for emission reduction of GHGs and<br />
enhancement of sinks (many still to be implemented). Also the<br />
awareness of the strong relationship between energy policy and<br />
climate change mitigation has grown. Policy initiatives to address<br />
climate change within the broader sustainable development agenda<br />
have developed."<br />
(Government of The Netherlands)<br />
4 A 4 19 4 19 The statement: “…reduction is not large enough to significantly<br />
affect the global emissions trend.” This is a <strong>co</strong>ntentious surmise<br />
since the reductions by national programmes (such as noted in the<br />
previous <strong>co</strong>mment) are quite significant, especially if seen in the<br />
long term <strong>co</strong>ntext of emissions saved due to avoidance of the lockins.<br />
(Government of India)<br />
4 A 4 20 4 20 "…….increase in formulating…." The word "increase" is not the<br />
right word, it means quantitative – suggest “improvement”.<br />
(Government of India)<br />
4 A 4 21 4 21 The parenthesis ("many still need to be implemented") needs to be<br />
much more strongly emphasized. Suggestion: "While there have<br />
been substantial increases in formulation GHG emissions reduction<br />
and sink enhancement policies, in awareness of the strong<br />
relationship between energy and land use policy and climate change<br />
mitigation and in policy initiatives to address climate change within<br />
the broader sustainable development agenda, the fact remains that<br />
many of these policies have yet to be implemented with the result<br />
that greenhouse gas emissions <strong>co</strong>ntinue to strongly grow globally."<br />
(John Drexhage, International Institute for Sustainable<br />
Development)<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-56 4 B 4 21 4 21 Substitute “most” for “many.” U.S. Government<br />
(Government of U.S. Department of State)<br />
Expert Review of Se<strong>co</strong>nd-Order-Draft<br />
Confidential, Do Not Cite or Quote<br />
Response suggested by <strong>co</strong><strong>chair</strong>s<br />
Action<br />
for<br />
chapter<br />
Considerations<br />
by the writing<br />
team<br />
REJ, see A-311, text deleted TIA – Section<br />
needs redrafting<br />
to ac<strong>co</strong>unt for<br />
<strong>co</strong>mments<br />
(1)<br />
TIA, reformulate TIA – Section<br />
needs redrafting<br />
to ac<strong>co</strong>unt for<br />
<strong>co</strong>mments<br />
(1)<br />
REJ; we mean “more” TIA – Section<br />
needs redrafting<br />
to ac<strong>co</strong>unt for<br />
<strong>co</strong>mments<br />
TIA in reformulating; suggested<br />
rewrite is too strong, tezt<br />
deleted.<br />
REJ; not <strong>co</strong>nsistent with<br />
underlying chapters<br />
(1)<br />
TIA – Section<br />
needs redrafting<br />
to ac<strong>co</strong>unt for<br />
<strong>co</strong>mments<br />
(1)<br />
TIA – Section<br />
needs redrafting<br />
to ac<strong>co</strong>unt for<br />
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