SODBatch A&B SPM Comments co-chair response final ... - ipcc-wg3
SODBatch A&B SPM Comments co-chair response final ... - ipcc-wg3
SODBatch A&B SPM Comments co-chair response final ... - ipcc-wg3
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IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Se<strong>co</strong>nd Order Draft<br />
1247 GHG emissions and climate change. This is surprising, given the<br />
principles of SD, which includes ‘environmental effectiveness”.<br />
This sentence needs to be modified.<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
1248<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
254<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
1249<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
1250<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
1251<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
1252<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
1253<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
255<br />
(Government of India)<br />
31 A 18 8 18 13 “Suggest adding statement regarding GHG increases due to<br />
developing e<strong>co</strong>nomies e<strong>co</strong>nomic growth is major anticipated new<br />
and increasing source of GHG. Large opportunity to address twoway<br />
relationship thru how carbon technologies that will support<br />
sustainable development.” U.S. Government<br />
(Government of U.S. Department of State)<br />
31 B 18 8 18 19 Integration and synergies with adaptation should be mentioned here<br />
as well.<br />
(Jean-Pascal van YPERSELE, Université catholique de Louvain<br />
(Belgium))<br />
31 A 18 9 18 9 Where may be these guidelines be found and who has written them<br />
for whom<br />
(Rachel Warren, University of East Anglia)<br />
31 A 18 9 18 9 The phrase "but may not always be so" seems to negate the whole<br />
sentence. This phrase can be replaced by other more positive<br />
phrases like "on a greater part".<br />
(Government of MALAWI)<br />
31 A 18 9 0 0 We propose that a footnote is included to explain to which<br />
Guidelines reference is made.<br />
(Government of Norwegian Pollution Control Authority)<br />
31 A 18 9 18 10 “Guidelines ………… sectors”. This is a general statement. Either<br />
give the “guidelines” or drop sentences.<br />
(Government of India)<br />
31 A 18 9 18 10 The reference to “Guidelines have been proposed…” is out of place<br />
in the headline sentence. The idea of guidelines has not gotten<br />
serious attention and does not merit highlighting in a broad<br />
statement about the relationship between climate change and other<br />
SD objectives. U.S. Government<br />
(Government of U.S. Department of State)<br />
31 B 18 9 18 10 The reference to “Guidelines have been proposed…” is out of place<br />
in the headline sentence. The idea of guidelines has not gotten<br />
serious attention and does not merit highlighting in a broad<br />
Expert Review of Se<strong>co</strong>nd-Order-Draft<br />
Confidential, Do Not Cite or Quote<br />
there are trade-offs between<br />
climate change and other<br />
elements of sustainable<br />
development”<br />
changed(Ch 12)<br />
REJ; not necessary here REJ; not<br />
appropriate<br />
here(Ch 12)<br />
ACC TIA; wording<br />
will change to<br />
incl reference to<br />
adaptation<br />
(Ch 12)<br />
DISCUSS 12 TIA; wording<br />
changed<br />
(Ch 12).<br />
Word<br />
“guidelines”<br />
will be<br />
removed.<br />
See A-1247 TIA; wording<br />
changed<br />
(Ch 12)<br />
See A-1249 TIA; wording<br />
changed<br />
(Ch 12)<br />
See A-1249 TIA; wording<br />
changed<br />
(Ch 12)<br />
See A-1249 TIA; wording<br />
changed<br />
(Ch 12)<br />
See A-1249 TIA; wording<br />
changed<br />
(Ch 12)<br />
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