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IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft
price reform in reducing emissions are:
“Is Demand for Polluting Goods Manageable? An Econometric
Study of Car Ownership and Use in Mexico.” 1997. (Gunnar S.
Eskeland and Tarhan Feyzioglu). Journal of Development
Economics 53(2):423–45.
“Prices that Clear the Air: Energy Use and Pollution in Chile and
Indonesia.” 1998. (Gunnar S. Eskeland, Emmanuel Jimenez, and
Lili Liu). The Energy Journal 19(3):85–106.
Papers demonstrating the importance of the investment climate are:
“Moving to Greener Pastures? Multinationals and the Pollutionhaven
Hypothesis.” 2003. (Gunnar S. Eskeland and Ann E.
Harrison). Journal of Development Economics, _vol 70, pp 1-23.
World Development Report 2003. Sustainable development in a
dynamic world. August 2002. World Bank. Chapters 3 and 7. (para
32 can then be eliminated).
(Government of Norwegian Pollution Control Authority)
SPM 1 6 1 7 Ch 12 recommends that SPM heading A be replaced with:
Without additional policies – both climate and
development policies – global GHG emissions will continue to
grow over the next few decades.
SPM 4 17 4 24 Chapter 12 recommends that SPM point 4 be replaced with:
There has been a substantial increase in formulating GHG
emission reductions, sink enhancement, and adaptation policies, but
many remain unimplemented. Because climate change mitigation
is closely intertwined in both developing and developed countries
with issues relating to economic growth, energy security,
environmental and social goals, in addition to climate specific
policies, careful attention to non-climate policies will be essential
to achieving greenhouse gases stabilization.
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SPM- 31 A 18 8 18 9 Gives the impression that SD policies could contribute to increased ACC; add “but in some cases TIA; wording
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