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IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft
528 specifically stated: "Governments providing strong policy direction
in the management of…."
(John Drexhage, International Institute for Sustainable
Development)
SPM-
529
SPM-
530
SPM-
531
SPM-
107
6 A 7 22 7 23 comment: possible inconsistencies with SPM P14/L39-40 and
P15/L29-31, Ch1/P21/L12-15, Ch2/P76/L22-23, Ch4 P96/L26-30
and P97/L5-9, Ch5/P74/L4-9, Ch7 P4/L19-23, P55/L42-44,
P56/L16-26 and P56/L45-48, Ch8/P56/L38-39, and Ch9/P74/L23
(Government of The Netherlands)
6 A 7 22 7 22 Unclear where the basis for their needing to be a “a strong
government role” in promoting tech transfer is. This assumption
would appear to be policy prescriptive and does not highlight the
role of the private sector, market forces etc.
(Government of Australia)
6 A 7 22 7 23 What does a strong government role mean/imply? U.S.
Government
(Government of U.S. Department of State)
6 B 7 22 7 22 Write: "A strong government role in mangement of long-term no-
and less-greenhouse gas technology development and deployment
is important ..."
Expert Review of Second-Order-Draft
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Response suggested by cochairs
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for
chapter
Considerations
by the writing
team
see ch 4 and 11 text proposals direction from
government is
important in the
management of
long term
technology
transitions
though
approaches may
differ.
(11)
Rejected. Other
comments
enjoyed the
sentence.
CHECK 2,3,4,5,7,
8,9
(4)
issue does not
appear to relate
to ch3.
(3)
Noted. It will be
checked.
TIA in reformulating Acceped. Check
text.
(4)
TIA in reformulating Accepted.
Check text.
REJ; that is not what is meant;
see also A-530, 531
(4)
(4)
REJ; that is not
what is meant;
see also A-530,
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