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Chapter- Comment SPM- 1189 SPM- 1190 SPM- 245 SPM- 1191 SPM- 1192 SPM- 1193 SPM- 1194 SPM- 1195 para Batch From Page From Line To Page To line Comments IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft 30 A 16 7 16 8 replace "moving from project to sector/national mechanisms" with "better institution arragement and improvement of project process". (Yuan Guo, Energy Research Institute, National Development and Reform Commission) 30 A 16 7 16 7 The environmental argument for expanding the mechanisms is the subject of debate in expert literature, and this paragraph does not reflect this. U.S. Government (Government of U.S. Department of State) 30 B 16 7 16 8 to sector/national mechanismms: Not clear what it means. (Jean-Pascal van YPERSELE, Université catholique de Louvain (Belgium)) 30 A 16 12 16 15 comment: seems to be inconsistent with Ch4/P109/L28-32, Ch5/P74/L22-25, Ch11/P79/L18-22, Ch13, P4/L29-30, P23/11-17, P32/L9-11, P62/40-48, Tables SPM-3 and 13.1 (Government of The Netherlands) 30 A 16 14 16 14 To add:¨.... Performance standards, technology transfer in preferential conditions, and adequate....¨ (CRISTOBAL FELIX DIAZ MOREJON, MINISTRY OF SCIENCE, TECHNOLOGY AND THE ENVIRONMENT) 30 A 16 17 16 17 insert: "implementation of" before "agreements" (Government of The Netherlands) 30 A 16 18 0 19 Is this observed or expected performance of approaches (in Table SPM.3)? (Stephen Sheppard, University of British Columbia) 30 A 16 18 16 19 comment: this is no conclusion and should not be a bullet (Government of The Netherlands) Expert Review of Second-Order-Draft Confidential, Do Not Cite or Quote Response suggested by cochairs REJ; that is not what is meant Action for chapter Considerations by the writing team DISCUSS ACC; clarify 13 TIA in new formulation on reducing global costs or enhancing environemtnal effecitveness (13) DISCUSS Needs to be checked thoroughly REJ; that is not what chapter says ACC See A-1195 ACC; make it a bracketed statement “(see table 3)” (if the 13 Reject (13) Chapter 13 still has to look at the other chapters mentioned here and provide an answer. Page 313 of 348
Chapter- Comment SPM- 1196 SPM- 1197 SPM- 246 SPM- 1198 para Batch From Page From Line To Page To line Comments IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft 30 A 16 18 16 19 Clarify focus of SPM. 3: 'in performance of specific approaches under an international agreement…' 30 F 3 (Government of Australia) A 16 18 16 19 Assessment commentary in SPM.3 is focussed upon international agreement considerations and is not always fully applicable when viewed only in a national context. (Government of Australia) 30 B 16 18 16 19 This thext is not part of the "bullet points" (Government of Switzerland) 30 A 16 20 0 0 1. Re adaptation, distributed generation (DG) with clean energy sources serves both adaptation and mitigation. DG can pump water fro health, cooking, and irrigation; power lighting for education; and power small enterprises. The health and development benefits of DG systems will decrease vulnerabilities overall, increase resilience in the face of storms and heat waves (complementing grids, where present), and lower greenhouse gas emissions. Editorial comment: I find the absence of DG as an adaptive measure curious. There is a growing body of literature and even a new journal (“Mitigation and Adaptation Strategies for Climate Change”) making these connections. There is growing urgency to address both adaptation and mitigation of climate change and I suggest that it not be omitted for the FAR of the IPCC. 2. I think it is central to include the deep ocean warming that underlies the acceleration of the hydrological cycle. Levitus et al. (2005) calculated that, in the past half century, the oceans have absorbed twenty-two times the amount of warming as has the atmosphere. Barnett et al. (2005) found that the pattern of warming in the deep ocean is unmistakably associated with the build-up of greenhouse gases. Barnett, T. P., Pierce, D. W., AchutaRao, K. M., Gleckler, P. J., Santer, B. D., Gregory, J. M. & Washington, W. M. Penetration of human-induced warming into the world's oceans. Science 309, 284-287 (2005). Levitus, S., Antonov, J.I., Boyer, T. Warming of the world ocean, 1955–2003, Expert Review of Second-Order-Draft Confidential, Do Not Cite or Quote Response suggested by cochairs table remains) See A-1195 REJ; fig is meant to be on international agreements as the caption says See A-1195 UNCLEAR; most seems for WG II; point 1 may be considered by chapters 6,8,12 Action for chapter 6,8,12 Considerations by the writing team Page 314 of 348
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