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IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft
approaches such as energy efficiency and CCS become more
important when striving for the lower levels is not clear enough!
(Government of Environment Canada)
A 7 25 7 25 Fig SPM-4: Explain the difference between the IMAGE and the
MESSAGE models. Reader does not know why the scenarios are
significantly different as the models are not described.
(Government of Environment Canada)
A 7 25 7 25 after "(2000-2100" add ")"
(Government of The Netherlands)
A 7 25 0 0 Figure SPM 4: Separate biofuels and CCS (combining apples and
oranges), biofuels are too important.
(Government of India)
B 7 25 7 27 Figure SPM.4 Replace "Cumulative emissions" by "Cumulative
global greenhouse gas emissions".
(Government of European Community / European Commission)
B 7 25 7 27 Figure SPM.4 Express x-axes unit in GtCO2-eq (consistency with
text and other graphs in SPM)
(Government of European Community / European Commission)
A 7 26 7 26 delete "(" before "MESSAGE"
(Government of The Netherlands)
A 7 26 7 26 The starting bracket before MESSAGE may be deleted.
(Government of Pakistan)
B 7 26 7 26 Figure SPM4: IMAGE and MESSAGE: why only 2 models ?
Other senarios are available, for example the NOE scenarios
developed by Benjamin Dessus in France ("Energie, un enjeu
planétaire", 1999, Belin)
(Jean-Pascal van YPERSELE, Université catholique de Louvain
(Belgium))
Expert Review of Second-Order-Draft
Confidential, Do Not Cite or Quote
Response suggested by cochairs
ACC; add sentence to caption or
para 6
Action
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Considerations
by the writing
team
Accepted. Add
sentence to
caption or para
6.
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ACC Accepted.
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ACC, see A-537 Rejected. We
are talking
about CCS with
bioenergy.
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ACC Accepted.
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ACC Accepted.
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ACC Accepted.
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ACC Accepted.
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ACC; add more models with
comparable portfolios
DISCUSS
3 Noted. Figure
being revised to
include
additional
models.
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