SODBatch A&B SPM Comments co-chair response final ... - ipcc-wg3

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IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft
22 A 13 34 13 35 What else could enhance sinks in the forestry sector, if not
"aforestation and reduced deforestation"? For non-specialists, this
sentence looks like a lapalisad.
(Cédric PHILIBERT, International Energy Agency)
22 A 13 34 13 34 To add: ¨.....combination of aforestation, reforestation and
reduced....¨
(CRISTOBAL FELIX DIAZ MOREJON, MINISTRY OF
SCIENCE, TECHNOLOGY AND THE ENVIRONMENT)
22 A 13 34 13 43 Para 22; “Implications for Sustainable development” of forest
sector mitigation options could be added to para heading and
mentioned in the last line of para.
(Government of India)
22 A 13 35 13 35 Insert the word "measure"after the word "effective"
(Government of MALAWI)
22 A 13 35 13 35 It is proposed to insert "approach" after "effective" in order to
improve the flow of the sentence.
(Government of Austria)
22 A 13 35 13 36 “A Large share ……… in above ground biomass”. This is not clear,
what about 'soil carbon'?
(Government of India)
22 A 13 35 13 0 Replace with “of afforestation and reduced deforestation offers the
greatest potential to enhance sinks and reduce and avoid and offset
emissions” . U.S. Government
(Government of U.S. Department of State)
22 A 13 35 13 35 “effective to” might be written “effective set of options to” U.S.
Government
(Government of U.S. Department of State)
22 A 13 35 13 35 change "high" into "medium" in consistency with chapter 9 page 48
line 26 and page 75 line 8.
(Government of Germany)
Expert Review of Second-Order-Draft
Confidential, Do Not Cite or Quote
Response suggested by cochairs
ACC; modify sentence to
become more informative
See A-963
TIA; mention in last line, not in
heading
See A-963
See A-963
REJ; sentence is clear
See A-963
See A-963
Action
for
chapter
9
Considerations
by the writing
team
SPM.
(8)
DISCUSS 9 Reviewer is
confusing with
the numerical
estimate in the
chapter .
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