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IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft
the taxonomy in the underlying chapter (which refers to
“institutional feasibility” a more encompassing and accurate term
for the discussion in Chapter 13). U.S. Government
(Government of U.S. Department of State)
27 B 15 5 15 5 Incosistency of wording: Criteria "equity" is called "distributional
considerations" in chapter 13.
(Government of European Community / European Commission)
27 A 15 6 15 6 Change the word "conclusion" to "conclusions"
(Government of MALAWI)
27 A 15 6 15 6 It is suggested to substitute "conclusion" by "conclusions".
(Government of Austria)
27 A 15 7 15 7 To add:¨.....broader development policies - including sustainable
development policies - , makes it easier...¨
(CRISTOBAL FELIX DIAZ MOREJON, MINISTRY OF
SCIENCE, TECHNOLOGY AND THE ENVIRONMENT)
27 A 15 7 15 8 Add a second sentence. "A first and critical step in doing so is
developing strong communications, particularly in ensuring that we
speak in a language that resonates with the policy
makers/practitioners in the relevant files of development."
(John Drexhage, International Institute for Sustainable
Development)
27 A 15 7 15 24 It should be mentioned that there are options for more flexible
design of existing economic instruments such as taxes and permit
trading, to make them economically and politically more attractive.
(As discussed in Technical Summary p. 107, line 35-48; and in
Chapter 13, p.53 and elsewhere.)
(Government of Australia)
27 A 15 7 15 8 "Integrating climate policies …...overcome barriers". It is important
to mention that “integrating climate policies in developmental
policies” will entail additional costs, particularly in developing
countries.
(Government of India)
27 A 15 9 15 9 I guess what is meant here is "certainty on emissions levels". By no
means such certainty could be named "environmental certainty", for
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Response suggested by cochairs
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for
chapter
Considerations
by the writing
team
consistency in
whole chapter
See ch 13
material.
ACC; make consistent
ACC
13 New list of
criteria
(13)
See A-1072
REJ; not needed
REJ; too detailed Chapter 12’s
bullet
(13)
REJ; section of TS refered to is
on international regime options
REJ; in many cases there are no
additional costs
ACC Revises
according to
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