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IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft
SPM-47 0 A 0 0 0 0 As with other WGs contributing to AR4, this draft is a major
achievement and the appreciation to all involved is due. The
following comments are restricted to issues of clarity in the SPM
only.
(Michael Raupach, CSIRO Marine and Atmospheric Research)
SPM-48 0 A 0 0 0 0 FY2005 was the memorable year for global warming prevention:
Kyoto Protocol entered into force following Russia's ratification,
and EU-ETS has started as the 1st international scheme. Also the
discussion on Post-Kyoto has started from COP11, then the
policymaker and industies are very interested in next climate chang
measures.`(1)
Table SPM.3 show us the criteria for assessing international
agreements on climate change, but I think it shold be clearer and in
more detail, in order to be refered by each
government/organization's policymaker. (2)
This table makes me receive the impression that "National emission
target and emission trading" is most suitable climate change policy,
and also I think so. If my interpretation is correct, more concrete
suggestion such as design of scheme and emission target should be
written down.
Extremingly speaking, it's preferable that the explanation on
scenario studies (p.5-8) is decreased and should expand the
sugession on "National emission target and emission trading".
Scenario studies should be explained in Technical Summary. (3)
(Takuya NAKAMURA, Mizuho Information & Research Institute)
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Response suggested by cochairs
Thank you
(1) REJ, no space in SPM
(2) Table to be deleted and
replaced by text
(3) REJ; no reason to drop
from SPM
SPM-49 0 A 0 0 0 0 The number of pages of the present text WG3, being presently Shorten report All
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