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IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft
6 A 7 8 0 0 remove "According to literature" and start with "The range of
atmospheric ……."
(Ronald Hutjes, Alterra)
6 A 7 8 7 12 Bearing in mind this is for policy makers, this point could benefit
from greater emphasis.Without coherent polices and measures from
Governments, there will be insufficient incentives to switch
inverstment from high carbon to low carbon technologies. The link
with the sentence around lines 23-24 on the need for a strong Govt
role would help.
(Government of UK)
6 A 7 8 7 9 The statement "can be delivered by a portfolio of technologies"
gives the impression that GHG emissions can be reduced by
technological intervention alone. Therefore this statement should be
revised to "can be delivered by a portfolio of policies and measures.
(Government of Japan)
6 A 7 8 7 12 Not sure this para does justice to the barriers issue. Related to para
above, is the projected investment sufficient to deliver the number
of new installations required?
(Government of Environment Canada)
Expert Review of Second-Order-Draft
Confidential, Do Not Cite or Quote
Response suggested by cochairs
explanation is needed
Ch 3 to –propose new wording
Action
for
chapter
Considerations
by the writing
team
mitigation
measures to be
implemented.
(4)
ACC Accepted.
(4)
TIA; maybe move line 23-24 up
see ch 4 text proposal
Noted. We will
keep the
sentence about
“strong
government
role” at the end
but will
emphasize the
importance of
policies
incentive in the
upper
paragraph.
(4)
REJ, but see A-489 Accepted.
(4)
See A-489; for LT not much
more can be said
Noted. We will
keep the
sentence about
“strong
government
role” at the end
but will
emphasize the
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