SODBatch A&B SPM Comments co-chair response final ... - ipcc-wg3
SODBatch A&B SPM Comments co-chair response final ... - ipcc-wg3
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Chapter-<br />
Comment<br />
para<br />
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From Line<br />
To Page<br />
To line<br />
<strong>Comments</strong><br />
IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Se<strong>co</strong>nd Order Draft<br />
1107 and information campaigns are politically attractive, raise<br />
awareness among stakeholders, and have played a role in the<br />
evolution of many national policies. With a few exceptions, the<br />
majority has achieved little reduction beyond the baseline' for ' -<br />
Voluntary agreements between industry and governments are<br />
politically attractive, raise awareness among stakeholders, and have<br />
played a role in the evolution of many national policies. With a few<br />
exceptions, the majority has achieved litte reduction beyond the<br />
baseline. - Public participation, Information, Education and<br />
Communication to society is a key part of every policy, and have a<br />
major role in climate change mitigation.'<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
1108<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
1109<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
237<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
1110<br />
(Government of Spain)<br />
27 A 15 18 15 21 VA is described as "the majority has achieved little reduction<br />
beyond the baseline". However, it is true that depending on the<br />
approach to implement VA, it can be effective and the text should<br />
be modified to reflect this. Alternatively, relevant text should be<br />
added to TS p.104,L11-13 "The successful programs include,<br />
among other elements: clear targets, a baseline scenario, third party<br />
involvement in design and review and formal provisions of<br />
monitoring.".<br />
(Government of Japan)<br />
27 A 15 18 15 18 Delete the word "voluntary" This term is missleading. The<br />
agreements are agreements but may be more or less voluntary.<br />
(Government of Norwegian Pollution Control Authority)<br />
27 B 15 18 15 21 … reduction beyond the baseline…: Please add "unless they<br />
<strong>co</strong>mplement other policies"<br />
(Jean-Pascal van YPERSELE, Université catholique de Louvain<br />
(Belgium))<br />
27 A 15 20 15 21 Regarding the sentense starting with "with a few exceptions,….." ,<br />
are there any major VA's that have failed to reduce emissions<br />
beyond BAU? If there are any, specific examples should be given.<br />
(Koji Kadono, Global Industrial and Social Progress Research<br />
Institute(GISPRI))<br />
Expert Review of Se<strong>co</strong>nd-Order-Draft<br />
Confidential, Do Not Cite or Quote<br />
Response suggested by <strong>co</strong><strong>chair</strong>s<br />
also A-1086, 1104-1113<br />
TIA when reformulating; see<br />
also A-1086, 1104-1113<br />
TIA when reformulating; see<br />
also A-1086, 1104-1113<br />
TIA when reformulating; see<br />
also A-1086, 1104-1113<br />
TIA when reformulating; see<br />
also A-1086, 1104-1113<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>- 27 A 15 20 11 21 The sentence ' with a few options…' is <strong>co</strong>rrect and should be kept. TIA when reformulating; see<br />
Action<br />
for<br />
chapter<br />
Considerations<br />
by the writing<br />
team<br />
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