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IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft
SPM- 1 A 1 14 1 15 Add after "Montreal Protocol": "(such as CFCs and HCFCs)"
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(Government of European Community / European Commission)
SPM- 1 A 1 14 1 15 To make the topic easier to understand, we propose the following
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additions: "However, emissions of ozone depleting greenhouse
gases, which are covered by the Montreal protocol, have declined
significantly.
(Government of Norwegian Pollution Control Authority)
SPM- 1 A 1 14 1 15 specify share of MP GHGs
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(Government of The Netherlands)
SPM- 1 A 1 14 1 14 The authors should indicate what gases are covered by the Montreal
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Protocol.
(Government of Australia)
SPM- 1 A 1 14 1 14 The authors should add the year to which information relates - (i.e
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is it 2003?).
(Government of Australia)
SPM- 1 A 1 14 1 14 "…………….for 46 % of global GHG emissions (Figure SPM.3)".
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Include “in 2003” after ‘emissions’.
(Government of India)
SPM- 1 A 1 14 1 14 For clarity, specify the GHG’s that are covered by the Montreal
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Protocol via footnote. U.S. Government
(Government of U.S. Department of State)
SPM-23 1 B 1 14 1 14 And end the sence with: "…GHG emissions (Figure SPM.3) but
this trend is decresing."
(Government of Switzerland)
SPM-24 1 B 1 14 1 14 For clarity, specify the GHG’s that are covered by the Montreal
Protocol via footnote. U.S. Government
(Government of U.S. Department of State)
SPM- 1 A 1 15 1 15 Mention which GHGs, otherwise it will be confusing.
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(Government of India)
SPM- 1 A 2 0 2 0 Figure on GHG Emissions 1970 - 2004. The figure shows what
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appears to be some increase in the HFCs, PFCs and SF6 category
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ACC, see A-156
to past base year
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TIA, see A158 TIA
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REJ; not for SPM TS Agree with TSU
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See A-156 Agree with TSU
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ACC; add that ACC
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ACC ACC
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See A-158 Agree with TSU
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REJ; not a correct statement Agree with TSU
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See A-158 Agree with TSU
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See A-158 Agree with TSU
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