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IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft
958 efficiency (ie LESS use of fertilisers), not in ENCOURAGING
THE USE of fertilisers. Please rephrase: "… and encourage
efficiency in the use of fertilisers".
SPM-
959
SPM-
960
(Andy Reisinger, TSU IPCC Synthesis Report)
21 A 13 32 13 32 Suggest adding "but there are cost and technological barriers" after
"have co-benifits",the current limitations should be emphasized.
(Government of China Meteorological Administration)
21 A 13 33 13 33 To add in the following manner:......through policies that carry to
sustainableagriculture, maintain soil carbon and encourage efficient
and sustainable use of fertilizers¨
(CRISTOBAL FELIX DIAZ MOREJON, MINISTRY OF
SCIENCE, TECHNOLOGY AND THE ENVIRONMENT)
Expert Review of Second-Order-Draft
Confidential, Do Not Cite or Quote
Response suggested by cochairs
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Considerations
by the writing
team
See A-946 Accepted (in
principle) –
actual wording
to reflect this
could instead be
as per response
to A SPM-946.
Suggest
changing the
start of the
sentence
beginning:
“Many
options…” to
“Though there
are numerous
barriers to
implementation,
many options
are potentially
immediately
deployable….”:
See A-958; TIA when
reformulating
(8)
(8)
Accepted to add
word
sustainable. See
also response to
comment A
SPM-958.
(8)
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