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SODBatch A&B SPM Comments co-chair response final ... - ipcc-wg3

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Chapter-<br />

Comment<br />

<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />

755<br />

<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />

186<br />

<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />

756<br />

<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />

757<br />

<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />

758<br />

<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />

759<br />

<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />

187<br />

para<br />

Batch<br />

From Page<br />

From Line<br />

To Page<br />

To line<br />

<strong>Comments</strong><br />

IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Se<strong>co</strong>nd Order Draft<br />

2030. A peer-reviewed source for this figure can be found in: den<br />

Elzen, M. and Meinshausen, M. 2006, “Multi-Gas Emission<br />

Pathways for Meeting the EU 2 C Climate Target”, In: Hans<br />

Joachim Schellnhuber (editor in chief) Avoiding Dangerous<br />

Climate Change, Cambridge University Press 299-309; figure 31.8,<br />

page 308<br />

(Government of Germany)<br />

10 A 11 19 11 26 Are there estimates regarding the GDP loss to be expected to meet<br />

the EU target of a maximum of 2 C?<br />

(Government of Germany)<br />

10 B 11 19 11 19 How do these <strong>co</strong>st estimated relate to those shown in paragraph 7<br />

(page 8)?<br />

(Government of European Community / European Commission)<br />

10 A 11 20 11 27 This paragraph should provide <strong>co</strong>sts estimates also for more<br />

aggressive mitigation scenarios, <strong>co</strong>nsistent with trajectories towards<br />

400 ppm and below.<br />

(,)<br />

10 A 11 20 11 20 Again, this paragraph seems to re<strong>co</strong>mmend a stabilization level<br />

around 650 ppmv CO2 emissions, while the literature on<br />

stablization of GHG <strong>co</strong>ncentrations indicate to levels as low as 375<br />

ppmv CO2. The text should therefore mention <strong>co</strong>st estimates for<br />

mitigation <strong>co</strong>nsitent with 375 ppmv<br />

(Giulio Volpi, WWF International)<br />

10 A 11 21 11 22 Please specify when stabilisation would occur.<br />

(Government of Australia)<br />

10 A 11 21 11 22 The figures of 0.5% and 1% GDP loss need some <strong>co</strong>ntext. Provide<br />

an estimate of the actual loss in dollars in 2030. Also, why is this<br />

for 2030 when similar data on p. 8, lines 4-6 are for 2050? U.S.<br />

Government<br />

(Government of U.S. Department of State)<br />

10 B 11 21 11 22 The figures of 0.5% and 1% GDP loss need some <strong>co</strong>ntext. Provide<br />

an estimate of the actual loss in dollars in 2030. Also, why is this<br />

for 2030 when similar data on p. 8, lines 4-6 are for 2050? U.S.<br />

Expert Review of Se<strong>co</strong>nd-Order-Draft<br />

Confidential, Do Not Cite or Quote<br />

Response suggested by <strong>co</strong><strong>chair</strong>s<br />

REJ; this can be derived from<br />

table 2 and para 10, but there is<br />

no reason to single that out in<br />

text<br />

Action<br />

for<br />

chapter<br />

Considerations<br />

by the writing<br />

team<br />

REJ.<br />

(11)<br />

See A-748,752 See 748<br />

(11)<br />

See A-749 See 744<br />

(11)<br />

See A-747 See A-747<br />

(11)<br />

ACC; refer to table 1 ACC.<br />

(11)<br />

See A-751<br />

REJ. Also drop<br />

Section C is ST, section B is LT<br />

footnote.<br />

(11)<br />

Identical A-759 REJ. Also drop<br />

footnote.<br />

(11)<br />

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