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IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft
685 (Yuan Guo, Energy Research Institute, National Development and
Reform Commission)
SPM- 9 A 9 11 9 12 The authors need to define what, in their view is an "adequate
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government policy".
(Government of Australia)
SPM- 9 B 9 12 9 15 These sentences describe the methodologies behind table SPM.2
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and the statement at the beginning of this paragraph. This is less
relevant for an SPM. Suggest to change table SPM.2 into a graph,
shortly describe ranking of key sectors and/or regions.
(Government of European Community / European Commission)
Expert Review of Second-Order-Draft
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Response suggested by cochairs
ACC; refer to section D;
DISCUSS possibility of turning
table 2 in a graph for the SPM
(leaving the table in the TS);
methodological issues are seen
by others as very relevant;
maybe move them to the figure
caption then
TIA; drop “intermediate”
SPM- 9 A 9 14 9 14 would "medium range" be clearer than "intermediate"?
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(Rachel Warren, University of East Anglia)
SPM- 9 A 9 15 0 0 "in line with" is not clear; one may understand that the AR4 2030 ACC; modify sentence
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potentials are similar to the TAR 2020 potentials OR that the AR4
2030 potentials are consistent with a 10 year extrapolation of the
2020 TAR numbers.
(Rob Swart, MNP)
SPM- 9 A 9 15 9 0 add: "These estimates do not include, however, potential emission DISCUSS 11,5
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reductions resulting from changes in production and consumption
patterns. For example switching from car transport to public
transport (and freight from road to rail), energy management
approaches in industry and a decrease in suburbanisation trends
would contribute to significant further reductions in emissions."
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SPM- 9 A 9 15 9 15 What is the significance of similarity between TAR estimates to See A-688
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2020 and AR4 estimates to 2030?
(Government of Environment Canada)
SPM- 9 B 9 15 9 15 … TAR estimates for 2020: yes, but here 2030 is discussed. Any See A-674
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comment on the 10-yr difference?
(Jean-Pascal van YPERSELE, Université catholique de Louvain
(Belgium))
SPM- 9 A 9 16 9 16 It is suggested to add the following important information: A TIA when merging section C
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