SODBatch A&B SPM Comments co-chair response final ... - ipcc-wg3
SODBatch A&B SPM Comments co-chair response final ... - ipcc-wg3
SODBatch A&B SPM Comments co-chair response final ... - ipcc-wg3
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Chapter-<br />
Comment<br />
para<br />
Batch<br />
From Page<br />
From Line<br />
To Page<br />
To line<br />
<strong>Comments</strong><br />
1182 (Government of The Netherlands)<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
1183<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
1184<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
244<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
1185<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
1186<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
1187<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
1188<br />
IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Se<strong>co</strong>nd Order Draft<br />
30 A 16 5 16 5 add: "Speeding up the phase-out of production and <strong>co</strong>nsumption of<br />
ozone depleting substances that are also potent greenhouse gases, or<br />
preventing their emission and destroying them at the end of life,<br />
would also <strong>co</strong>ntribute significantly to efficiently <strong>co</strong>mbating climate<br />
change."<br />
(Government of The Netherlands)<br />
30 A 16 5 16 5 add: "Overall <strong>co</strong>st efficiency and environmental effectiveness<br />
would also benefit from including sectors currently not included in<br />
the Kyoto Proto<strong>co</strong>l, such as international air traffic and shipping."<br />
(Government of The Netherlands)<br />
30 B 16 5 16 5 … <strong>co</strong>stly … : for whom ?<br />
(Jean-Pascal van YPERSELE, Université catholique de Louvain<br />
(Belgium))<br />
30 A 16 6 16 7 replace " make agreements more efficient" with "reduce mitigation<br />
<strong>co</strong>sts in overall".<br />
(Yuan Guo, Energy Research Institute, National Development and<br />
Reform Commission)<br />
30 A 16 6 16 7 Affter"Expanding……efficient." add "While some obstackles<br />
<strong>co</strong>ntinue to exist. For example, sectoral baselines are normally<br />
uncertain and leakages derived from sectoral approaches are<br />
remained."<br />
(Government of China Meteorological Administration)<br />
30 A 16 6 16 6 Market mechanisms have already been said to improve the <strong>co</strong>steffectiveness<br />
and efficiency of agreements. Change to "<strong>co</strong>uld<br />
further <strong>co</strong>ntribute to making agreements…."<br />
(Government of Environment Canada)<br />
30 A 16 6 16 8 “Market mechanisms <strong>co</strong>uld” / “Transaction <strong>co</strong>sts <strong>co</strong>uld” – what<br />
about might in both cases? Policy prescriptive. U.S. Government<br />
(Government of U.S. Department of State)<br />
Expert Review of Se<strong>co</strong>nd-Order-Draft<br />
Confidential, Do Not Cite or Quote<br />
Response suggested by <strong>co</strong><strong>chair</strong>s<br />
REJ; not for this paragraph<br />
REJ; already <strong>co</strong>vered in line 3-4<br />
ACC; change to “will have<br />
lower overall <strong>co</strong>sts”<br />
ACC; change to “<strong>co</strong>uld reduce<br />
overall mitigation <strong>co</strong>sts”<br />
Action<br />
for<br />
chapter<br />
Considerations<br />
by the writing<br />
team<br />
See executive<br />
summary, to<br />
include higher<br />
<strong>co</strong>sts or more<br />
environmentally<br />
effective.<br />
(13)<br />
UNCLEAR Reject<br />
(13)<br />
ACC<br />
REJ; “<strong>co</strong>uld” is not policy<br />
prescriptive<br />
Drop the<br />
sentence on<br />
transaction <strong>co</strong>sts<br />
(13)<br />
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