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IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft
based on Demand Side Management measures (including pure
energy saving), and Renewable Energy Sources. It is true that to
define Sustainable Development is a very difficult task, because it
depends from many different situations and parameters, but
Sustainable Energetic could be defined unambiguosly, in a much
easier and direct way; however, attaining Sustainable Energetic is a
pre-requisite if you want to attain Sustainable Development,
whatever situation you are now, or whatever parameters you
employ. Every country and region must find and construct its own
Sustainable Energetic, based on its natural resources and
characteristics, its own culture and preferences, its own scientific
and technological development, etc. Once attained, sustainable
energetic would reduce substantially production costs (fossil fuels
won't be necessary), GHG emissions, atmospheric pollution, acid
rain, etc., bringing many ancillary benefits as more health, less
finantial difficulties caused by increasing fossil fuels prices, and
others.
(JULIO TORRES-MARTINEZ, Cuban Observatory for Science
and Technology)
A 18 30 18 30 Figure SPM.6: The climate change circule must grow and intersect
the Impact circule and socioeconomic box. Also circule and box of
Impact and Socieconomic must intersect. The Emision circule
would go in the bottom and become a box like in the base of the
others. A arrow from Emision to climate globe as a balloon bottom
will end in to valvules with a + in one (to inflate) and a - (to
deflate).
(Government of Spain)
A 18 30 18 0 As currently presented, the figure is problematic. Authors should
elaborate the detailed source of this information. It is too subject to
misinterpretation. The explanation in this chapter is sufficiently
detailed in pages 51-52 to explain the meaning of the figure, but
even in the TS and SPM, that detail disappears (could add figure
caption from SPM.6 to Figure 12.4 too). For example, the SPM
refers to policy areas, not sectors, implying that the correct choice
of policies could eliminate the emissions. U.S. Government
(Government of U.S. Department of State)
A 18 31 0 0 Figure SPM 6. There should be some mention of framing issues
included in this figure. Please refer to the Technical Summary, page
10, lines 5-25 for appropriate examples.
(Government of Japan)
REJ; figure is from TAR/Syr
and has been quoted often
See A-1268
ACC; add to caption
SPM- 31 A 18 31 0 0 We propose that the word "dotted" is deleted.
Expert Review of Second-Order-Draft
Confidential, Do Not Cite or Quote
REJ; dotted arrows still to be
Noted. Fig.6
dropped
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Unless it can be
used in the
initial part of
SPM.
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