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32 A 19 33 19 33 Phrasing: '…that either there will be…'
(Government of Australia)
IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft
32 A 19 34 19 34 By "more hard currency" do the authors mean increased foreign
expenditure?
(Government of Australia)
32 A 19 37 19 38 Insert "in certain circumstances" between "may" and "result" and
"short-term" between "result in" and "loss of" in line 38. Reducing
deforestation may well result in a temporary short term loss of
economic welfare in those countries and regions where
deforestation is currently providing unsustainable short-term gains
in the economic (but not necessarily environmental or
developmental) sense. There can be little doubt that sustainable
development, properly implemented (including carbon crediting)
could help to both prevent deforestation and enhance economic
welfare.
(Pat Finnegan, Grian)
32 A 19 37 19 38 "Reducing deforestation….may result in loss of economic welfare":
if that is already so, it is only temporarily so as deforestation leads
Expert Review of Second-Order-Draft
Confidential, Do Not Cite or Quote
UNCLEAR
(12)
Not Ch8 issue
(8)
Rejected as it is
not clear
(12)
ACC; replace “hard” by
Not Ch8 issue
“foreign”
(8)
Accepted. Will
be modified
(12)
REJ; “may”already indicates . Not Ch8 issue –
that there is a probability
refer to Ch9
(8)
Agree to the
comment,
currently
inconsistent
with ch 9 .
Suggest to
delete first
sentence of the
second bullet
(9)
Reject; ‘may
already
indicates that
there is a
probability
(12)
Still needs to be
discussed with
chapter 9
(jayant & gertjan).
Initiative
is with chapter
12 to contact 9
and possible
other chapters
DISCUSS Not Ch8 issue –
refer to Ch9
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