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IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft
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SPM- 23 A 14 7 14 7 It is proposed to delete "a" in order to improve the flow of the See A-982, 988
Accepted
(4)
Accepted.
989
sentence.
(8)
(Government of Austria)
Accepted
(4)
SPM- 23 A 14 7 14 7 delete 'a'
See A-982, 988 Accepted.
990
(Government of Belgium)
(8)(4)
SPM- 23 A 14 7 14 7 delete "a" in "of a the order"
See A-982,988 Accepted.
991
(Government of The Netherlands)
(8)(4)
SPM- 23 A 14 7 14 7 Remove 'a' appearing between 'of' and 'the'.
See A-982,988 Accepted.
992
(Government of Pakistan)
(8)(4)
SPM- 23 A 14 8 0 0 this is the only quantitative statement of all sectors, suggest to drop See A-982,985 Accepted. True
993
the numbers (should be in Table) and replace qualitative
both for the
uncertainty statement by confidence statement like inall other
number and for
sectoral statements.
the confidence
(Rob Swart, MNP)
statement. Wait
until after
Biomass CCT
group meeting.
(8)
Agree
(9)
Rejected. SPM
should as
quantitative as
possible.
Consider
reducing
number of
significant
digits.
(4)
SPM- 23 A 14 8 14 11 Use of subordinate clauses in this sentence makes the meaning See A-982 Accepted. I
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