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Chapter- Comment para 153 ea di ng SPM- 667 SPM- 668 SPM- 669 SPM- 670 9h ea di ng 9h ea di ng Batch From Page From Line To Page To line Comments IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft limited.” For example, such studies may presume perfectly efficient policies (i.e., global reduction at the lowest marginal cost). [NOTE TO TPCC review team:It is recommended that a USG economist looks at this paragraph closely. This statement is essentially saying that peaking global emissions in the next 20 years will have limited impacts on annual GDP growth. This statement appears counterintuitive. END NOTE] The use of the terms “low cost” and “limited” ane inappropriate value judgements and the authors should rephrase the sentence. U.S. Government (Government of U.S. Department of State) A 9 5 9 5 To help readers make the most of the SPM, it might be helpful to end this sentence with "… government policies as described in Section D". Otherwise readers might be left with the question "yes, but what policies?" (Andy Reisinger, TSU IPCC Synthesis Report) A 9 5 9 5 Add "and efforts from multi-communities" (Government of China Meteorological Administration) 9 A 9 7 11 16 The first three sentences of this paragraph need to be redrafted as they present a misleading picture as to the certainty of the costs estimates and economic potential for mitigation of Greenhouse gases by 2030. The figures are also presented without the significant caveats that surround the bottom-up estimate of Table 11.3. The authors of the SPM need to ensure that the context that the discussion of the economic potential for mitigation, is clear and should not imply that the challenge to reduce greenhouse gas emissions is an easy one. (Government of Australia) 9 A 9 7 9 12 Suggest that the following text replaces the first three sentences (this text is derived from Section 11.3 and the Technical Summary): "Table SPM 2 provides a rough, bottom-up estimate of the potential for mitigation of greenhouse gases in 2030. The table illustrates that in 2030, between 8-12 GtCO2-eq could be mitigated at costs Expert Review of Second-Order-Draft Confidential, Do Not Cite or Quote Response suggested by cochairs Action for chapter Considerations by the writing team (11) ACC ACC (11) UNCLEAR Request clarification. (11) REJ; caveats are given in para 9 (can also be strengthened in table 2 ) Caveats to be strengthened in table and text. TIA when merging section C header with para 9 Caveats still to be discussed. (11) Useful text to be considered. Revise penultimate sentence to say Page 173 of 348
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