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IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft
23 A 14 9 14 9 It is proposed to substitute "the literature" by "some literature" in
order to be more consistent with the limited evidence as indicated
by footnote 13.
(Government of Austria)
23 A 14 9 14 11 “literature indicates that supply from agriculture and forestry,
without compromising food security at global scale, is not a
limiting factor” References (literature) discussed in some other
chapter?
(Government of Finland)
23 A 14 10 14 12 "Supply from agriculture and forestry, without compromising food
security at global scale, is not a limiting factor." The statement is
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Response suggested by cochairs
See A-982
REJ; it is representative of the
literature
See A-982
Is in ch4
See A-982
DISCUSS
Action
for
chapter
Considerations
by the writing
team
Accepted. I
think this is a
fair statement.
We should
revise this
paragraph –
topic for the
bioenergy
breakout group
discussion in
NZ?
(8)
Noted. Check if
we have to
restrain the
word
“literature”.
(4)
Accepted. I
think this is a
fair statement.
We should
revise this
paragraph –
topic for the
bioenergy
breakout group
discussion in
NZ?
See comment
SPM 982 A.
(4)
Accepted. I
think this is a
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