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IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft
26 A 14 40 14 40 "important" should be replaced by "needed, and are essential in
relation to innovation …." (assuming that this is backed up by the
chapters)
(Rachel Warren, University of East Anglia)
27 A 15 1 15 2 To add:¨......to create the incentives and regulatory measures
required....¨
(CRISTOBAL FELIX DIAZ MOREJON, MINISTRY OF
SCIENCE, TECHNOLOGY AND THE ENVIRONMENT)
27 A 15 1 15 45 This is a useful summary of policy instruments. Worth talking also
about coherence between policies; the need for longer term stabiltiy
of instrumetn in order to de-risk investment in low carbon
innovation and commercialisation; and the need for a critical mass
market to sustain investment stimulated by the public purse or
public policy.
(Government of UK)
27 A 15 1 15 24 Feed in tariffs and technology quota systems (such as green
electricity certificates and renewable energy portfolio standards) are
surprisingly not included in this list. They are also absent from Ch
13 (with the exception of one misplaced footnote). As stated in
SPM Paragraph 13, in particular feed in tariffs have been
successful.
(Government of Sweden)
27 A 15 2 15 24 uncertainty statements are missing, different from the other
statements I suggest to apply those to each individual bullet.
(Rob Swart, MNP)
27 A 15 2 0 26 Para 27. The text in bold defines four main criteria: environmental
effectiveness, economic efficiency, equity, and political feasibility.
Consistency would improve if those criteria were used in the bullets
of the para. Regulatory measures and standards are characterised as
Expert Review of Second-Order-Draft
Confidential, Do Not Cite or Quote
Response suggested by cochairs
See A-1057
REJ; not needed, regulations are
included
ACC; add some words about
stability of policy
DISCUSS issue of critical mass;
might be relavnt for para 26
TIA; quota and portfolio
standards belong under tradable
permits; ; add in brackets
Feed-in tariffs belong under
financial incentives ; add in
brackets/
ACC
Action
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chapter
Considerations
by the writing
team
13 Look at full list
of criteria
(13)
Bring out issue
of stability.
Looking into
critical mass
issue
Rewording done
on ES level.
Wait for ch 13
text proposals
Reject
(13)
ACC; reformulate Not correct
criteria, see
ES13
(13)
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