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SODBatch A&B SPM Comments co-chair response final ... - ipcc-wg3

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<strong>Comments</strong><br />

IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Se<strong>co</strong>nd Order Draft<br />

energy-efficient investments as a general rule. The chapter also<br />

needs to state the fact that when <strong>co</strong>st-efficient investments are not<br />

made, this might very well be because they do not meet the internal<br />

hurdle rate of the <strong>co</strong>mpany. If these investments in <strong>co</strong>st-efficient<br />

energy savings etc. were made, they would push aside better, more<br />

profitable and more innovative investments made by the <strong>co</strong>mpany.<br />

The risk would be a distortionary impact on the <strong>co</strong>mpany with less<br />

innovation taking place in the <strong>co</strong>mpany.<br />

(Helle Juhler-Kristoffersen, Confederation of Danish Industries)<br />

<strong>SPM</strong>-17 9 A 0 0 0 0 The <strong>SPM</strong> needs in general to be looked through to avoid<br />

generalisations which are building on cases and examples claiming<br />

that CEOs miss <strong>co</strong>st-efficient opportunities of energy-saving or<br />

energy-efficient investments as a general rule. The chapter also<br />

needs to state the fact that when <strong>co</strong>st-efficient investments are not<br />

made, this might very well be because they do not meet the internal<br />

hurdle rate of the <strong>co</strong>mpany. If these investments in <strong>co</strong>st-efficient<br />

energy savings etc. were made, they would push aside better, more<br />

profitable and more innovative investments made by the <strong>co</strong>mpany.<br />

The risk would be a distortion impact on the <strong>co</strong>mpany with less<br />

innovation taking place in the <strong>co</strong>mpany.<br />

(,)<br />

<strong>SPM</strong>-18 0 A 0 0 0 0 It is vital that any assumptions and uncertainties in the data given<br />

on <strong>co</strong>sts and benefits of climate change mitigation policies are<br />

properly quantified within the <strong>SPM</strong>.<br />

(,)<br />

<strong>SPM</strong>-19 0 A 0 0 0 0 In a busy world, the <strong>co</strong>ntent, presentation and message(s) <strong>co</strong>nveyed<br />

by the <strong>SPM</strong> will have to largely stand for the effect of the entire<br />

report on the vast majority of (not just) the ordinary public but--experience<br />

tends (unfortunately) to show---the vast majority of<br />

policymakers also. For the vast majority of people, this effect will<br />

be both amplified and pre-empted by media selection of material<br />

from the <strong>SPM</strong> for the maximum news effect. Every word, every<br />

statement and every graph or table should therefore be drafted and<br />

presented with this dynamic in mind, both on a stand-alone basis<br />

Expert Review of Se<strong>co</strong>nd-Order-Draft<br />

Confidential, Do Not Cite or Quote<br />

Response suggested by <strong>co</strong><strong>chair</strong>s<br />

Identical A16<br />

TIA, Uncertainty info to be<br />

improved<br />

Thank you<br />

Action<br />

for<br />

chapter<br />

CG<br />

Uncertai<br />

nty<br />

Considerations<br />

by the writing<br />

team<br />

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