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IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft
17 A 13 6 13 11 We think that the findings on domestic and industrial refrigeration
and air-conditioning from the special report "Safeguarding the
Ozone Layer and the Global climate System - Issues Related to
Hydrofluorcarbons and Perfluorcarbons" should be integrated into
this section.
(Government of Norwegian Pollution Control Authority)
17 B 13 6 13 7 The SPM discusses supply and demand strategies for GHG
mitigation separately – while failing to make the important point
that energy planning, policies, and goals need to systematically
consider additional measures to reduce energy demand as a costeffective
alternative to new supply, and build in “integrated energy
resource planning” to all decisions about energy infrastructure
investment and utilization. U.S. Government
(Government of U.S. Department of State)
18 A 13 7 13 10 This section could benefit from a brief discussion of scale and
potential - ie for new build it would be technically possible to cut
the carbon footprint by half through low carbon design and building
management but what is happening is dictated by the stepwise
improvements in carbon emissions.
(Government of UK)
18 A 13 7 13 8 These include energy or carbon pricing, appliance standards,…
(Government of Norwegian Pollution Control Authority)
18 A 13 9 13 9 Insert ' informative and educational programs', and public sector
energy leadership programmes,…
(Government of Spain)
Expert Review of Second-Order-Draft
Confidential, Do Not Cite or Quote
Response suggested by cochairs
ACC; sentence to be added 6
ACC; but add to para 14
ACC; make distinction between
existing and new buildings
REJ; energy and carbon pricing
is already under “pricing
measures”
REJ; already covered under
“labelling”
Action
for
chapter
Considerations
by the writing
team
Too detailed for
SPM
(6) but will
reconsider. Ch 6
to propose text.
Discussion
about the
difficulties of
making the split
between old and
new buildings.
accepted,
educational
programs added
(6)
SPM- 18 A 13 9 13 0 A transition is required. Add "however" to the beginning of "to ACC , changed.
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