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IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft
A 3 10 3 11 Figure SPM.3 Clarify what is "centrally planned Asia" in a note or
in the caption.
(Government of UK)
A 3 10 3 20 Figure SPM.3: "Centrally Planned Asia" and "Other Asia" should
not be seperated and need to be replaced by only "Asia". "Centrally
Planned Asia" is an outdated word and is not suitable for current
situation. IPCC report should evaluate the new scientific results but
not out-of-date stuff.
(Government of China Meteorological Administration)
A 3 10 3 11 Figure SPM.2: This figure is very informative. One of the most
relevant information seems to be that the net change in global
emissions over the decades shown is increasing. This means that
the global emissions are increasing even with an increasing rate.
However, this message is not reflected in the caption. Given the
importance of that result it seems important to highlight it.
(Government of Austria)
A 3 10 3 10 Abbreviations for country groups in Figure SPM.3 should be given
in full in the figure caption.
(Government of Environment Canada)
A 3 10 3 50 SPM Figure 3: The regional country groupings need to be
explained, and for those groupings where it is not clear the authors
should list the countries included (i.e. Centrally Planned Asia,
Other Non-Annex 1).
(Government of Australia)
A 3 11 0 0 Figure SPM.3. The figure would be clearer if one added to the label
"Non Annex I: 53.6% OF ANNUAL EMISSIONS". The share of
hostirical cumulative emissions, e.g. from 1955 - 2005, calculated
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Response suggested by cochairs
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DISCUSS; change into East- 1
Chapter 9
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Asia or only present Asia as a
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Defer to
Bioenergy CCT
group meeting
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See A-230 1 ACC Will be
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(1) Coming
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with Lynn Price.
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