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TM1 en inglés traducción de Katherine Woods.
―As the little prince dropped off to sleep, I took him in my arms and set out walking
once more. I felt deeply moved, and stirred. It seemed to me that I was carrying a very
fragile treasure. It seemed to me, even, that there was nothing more fragile on all Earth.
In the moonlight I looked at his pale forehead, his closed eyes, his locks of hair that
trembled in the wind, and I said to myself:
"What I see here is nothing but a shell. What is most important is invisible..." (Capítulo
XXIV, 55.)
TM2 en inglés traducción de Richard Howard.
―As the Little prince was falling asleep, I picked him up in my harms, and started
walking again. I was moved. It was as if I was carrying a fragile teasure. It actually
seemed to me there was nothing fragile on Earth. By the light of the moon, I gazed at
that pale forehead, those closed eyes, those locks of hair trembling in the wind, and I
said to myself, What I am looking at is only a shell. What‘s most important is
invisible…‖ (Capítulo XXIV, 68.)
TM1 en español traducción tomada de ., traductor
desconocido. ―Como el principito se dormía, lo tomé en mis brazos y me puse
nuevamente en camino. Me sentía emocionado llevando aquel frágil tesoro, y me
parecía que nada más frágil había sobre la Tierra. Miraba a la luz de la luna aquella
frente pálida, aquellos ojos cerrados, los cabellos agitados por el viento y me decía :
"lo que veo es sólo la corteza; lo más importante es invisible... " (Capítulo XXIV, 39.)
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