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Appendix 2. Reviewer’s Comments and Response to CommentsReviewer #2Report Title: <strong>Potential</strong> <strong>Effects</strong> <strong>of</strong> <strong>Contaminants</strong> on Fraser River Sockeye SalmonReviewer Name: Sonja SaksidaDate: Jan 4, 20111. Identify the strengths and weaknesses <strong>of</strong> this report.My expertise is limited in the area <strong>of</strong> contaminants and hence the review is not ascomprehensive as others.StrengthsThe report is very thorough. The authors have to be commended on havingsummarized a large amount <strong>of</strong> material they had to work with even though, as isapparent with the other reports, the datasets are incomplete and inconsistent.Response: No response is necessary.The authors do discuss the data gaps.Response: No response is necessary.The layout <strong>of</strong> the document is good.Response: No response is necessary.The study approach provided is good, and the authors provide good parameters usedin their evaluations <strong>of</strong> potential impacts (pg 8 -Ln558-565)Response: No response is necessary.Good discussion on effects <strong>of</strong> contaminants - direct mortality vs endocrine disruptionaffecting the fishes ability to withstand other stessors (i.e. exposure to infectiousdisease).Response: No response is necessary.Good discussion on models and uncertainty, errors (Chapter 7).Response: No response is necessary.The conclusions and recommendations are appropriate.Response: No response is necessary.A-7
WeaknessesThere is a lot <strong>of</strong> repetition in the document (e.g. start <strong>of</strong> introduction and summary verysimilar as is the executive summary), removing some <strong>of</strong> this would make the documentmore concise.Response: Agreed. The Executive Summary was revised as recommended.In addition, the rest <strong>of</strong> the document was reviewed to identify opportunities tomake the text more concise.Many abbreviations used - difficult to follow for somebody not an expert in the field.Response: Agree. The text was edited to limit the use <strong>of</strong> abbreviations.While some abbreviations still exist in the Tables and Figures, abbreviationshave largely been eliminated from the main text.There is a lot <strong>of</strong> discussion on the sockeye decline over the last 20 years and theincrease in many <strong>of</strong> the contaminants –it would be interesting to see how the high 2010returns fit into this picture.Response: A discussion <strong>of</strong> the implications <strong>of</strong> the high return <strong>of</strong> sockeyesalmon in 2010 on the main findings <strong>of</strong> the evaluation was added to the text (SeeChapter 8 for more information).The authors focused primarily on contaminants in the FW phase; are there anyconcerns in the marine environments that should be considered?Response: Yes, the potential effects <strong>of</strong> exposure to contaminants in themarine environment needs to be considered, particularly in the Strait <strong>of</strong> Georgiawhere there are discharges from various municipal wastewater treatment plantsand industrial facilities. Such an evaluation was beyond the scope <strong>of</strong> thisinvestigation, however.2. Evaluate the interpretation <strong>of</strong> the available data, and the validity <strong>of</strong> anyderived conclusions. Overall, does the report represent the best scientificinterpretation <strong>of</strong> the available data?The report does a very good job in interpreting the available data.Response: No response is necessary.3. Are there additional quantitative or qualitative ways to evaluate the subjectarea not considered in this report? How could the analysis be improved?The authors focused primarily on contaminants in the FW phase; are there anyconcerns in the marine environments that should be considered?Response: Yes. However, evaluation <strong>of</strong> the potential effects on sockeyeA-8
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February 2011technical report 2<str
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thresholds), which represent lowest
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Table of ContentsE
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5.5 Summary of the
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List of TablesTabl
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Figure 5.20 Late Stuart Sockeye Sal
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the lowest observed effect concentr
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Chapter 9 References CitedAdams, R.
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Braune, B., D. Muir, B. DeMarch, M.
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EIP Associates. 1997. Polychlorinat
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