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Potential Effects of Contaminants on Fraser River Sockeye Salmon

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salm<strong>on</strong> associated with exposure to c<strong>on</strong>taminants in the marine envir<strong>on</strong>ment isbey<strong>on</strong>d the scope <str<strong>on</strong>g>of</str<strong>on</strong>g> the current investigati<strong>on</strong>.4. Are the recommendati<strong>on</strong>s provided in this report supportable? Do you haveany further recommendati<strong>on</strong>s to add?Yes the recommendati<strong>on</strong>s do appear supportableResp<strong>on</strong>se: No resp<strong>on</strong>se is necessary.5. What informati<strong>on</strong>, if any, should be collected in the future to improve ourunderstanding <str<strong>on</strong>g>of</str<strong>on</strong>g> this subject area?The authors discuss this in the recommendati<strong>on</strong>s.Resp<strong>on</strong>se: No resp<strong>on</strong>se is necessary.6. Please provide any specific comments for the authors.Pg 36 Ln 1541 - do vineyards also c<strong>on</strong>tribute to agricultural polluti<strong>on</strong>? - this has been<strong>on</strong> the rise in the last decade or so.Resp<strong>on</strong>se: Yes. The text was revised to identify the fungicides associatedgrape producti<strong>on</strong> (i.e., to discourage powdery mildew and grey mould) in thetext (i.e., primarily sulphur). Other pesticides used in grape producti<strong>on</strong> werealso identified.Pg 47 Ln1909 - sec<strong>on</strong>d bracket missingResp<strong>on</strong>se: Bracket was added as noted.Pg 49Ln1971 - Ricker not Richer.Resp<strong>on</strong>se: Spelling error was corrected.Pg 44 - Figure 4.5 discussi<strong>on</strong>. This figure could indicate the problem is in FW since allstocks with the excepti<strong>on</strong> <str<strong>on</strong>g>of</str<strong>on</strong>g> Harris<strong>on</strong> stay in FW for a year or problem is in the openocean since all stocks beside Harris<strong>on</strong> leave Georgia Strait.Resp<strong>on</strong>se: Excellent observati<strong>on</strong>! The text was revised to make this pointexplicitly.Pg 97 Ln 3731 - comma not periodResp<strong>on</strong>se: Agreed. Text was changed accordingly.Pg 109 Ln 4152 - 2007 not 1997?Resp<strong>on</strong>se: This typographical error was corrected in the text.A-9

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