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GRAMMATICALLY CORRECT<br />

possible <strong>to</strong> omit the conjunction, since it could easily be inferred.<br />

If this is done, the comma is no longer the right separa<strong>to</strong>r, since<br />

putting it between two independent clauses would create a comma<br />

splice. <strong>The</strong> semicolon is the proper mark instead. In this role, it acts<br />

as a sort of stand-in for the missing conjunction, sending a signal<br />

<strong>to</strong> readers that there is some implicit and self-evident relationship<br />

between the clauses it separates.<br />

His offer sounded <strong>to</strong>o good <strong>to</strong> be true; I didn't believe it.<br />

Doreen was starting <strong>to</strong> worry; Leo was now two hours late.<br />

We didn't have the heart <strong>to</strong> continue; it all seemed so futile.<br />

Sol is the practical one in the family; his brother is the dreamer.<br />

Aside from shaving off a word, an advantage <strong>to</strong> omitting conjunctions<br />

is that an over-exactitude in spelling everything out can render<br />

your style a bit ponderous. Writing often comes through as subtler,<br />

more sophisticated, if you leave a few blanks for your readers <strong>to</strong><br />

fill in for themselves. (For other strategies, see the discussions of<br />

elliptical constructions on page 85 and the suspension hyphen on<br />

page 135.)<br />

Of course, omitting conjunctions isn't appropriate in all cases.<br />

Sometimes a conjunction couldn't easily be inferred, and a sentence<br />

might look puzzling without it.<br />

She longed <strong>to</strong> stay till the end of the talk; she had <strong>to</strong> leave.<br />

<strong>The</strong> connection between these clauses isn't immediately obvious,<br />

so the sentence comes through as mildly confusing. It may be a bit<br />

of a strain for a reader <strong>to</strong> deduce that the missing conjunction must<br />

be yet or but.<br />

In other cases, different conjunctions might be possible, so omitting<br />

the intended one might cause a reader <strong>to</strong> put the wrong interpretation<br />

on the sentence.<br />

<strong>The</strong> task clearly would be difficult; I would have a day <strong>to</strong> do it.<br />

Is the missing word here and? but? since? so? Is one day plenty<br />

of time or not enough time? In the absence of a conjunction, the<br />

intention of the second clause could be misconstrued. Other parts<br />

of the text might provide enough context <strong>to</strong> clarify the <strong>writer's</strong><br />

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