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GRAMMATICALLY CORRECT<br />

is about <strong>to</strong> leave (whether on her own or with someone else), and<br />

just then Jere my happens <strong>to</strong> show up.<br />

Similarly,<br />

He didn't like her because she was successful and talented.<br />

[He liked her for other reasons].<br />

He didn't like her, because she was successful and talented.<br />

[And presumably he wasn't].<br />

In each of the following sentences, there is a distinct shift in<br />

direction between the independent and the dependent clauses: that<br />

is, one piece of information is followed by another, rather than the<br />

meaning of the first clause being dependent on the second. <strong>The</strong>refore,<br />

they are separated by a comma.<br />

He threatened <strong>to</strong> fire me, as if I cared.<br />

She ran for miles, until her legs gave out.<br />

He's never had a job in his life, unless you count that two-week stint as a<br />

taster at the chocolate fac<strong>to</strong>ry.<br />

She had <strong>to</strong> hurry <strong>to</strong> get the house spotless, since the cleaning lady was<br />

expected that morning.<br />

<strong>The</strong> rule is the same for phrases: Put a comma before a concluding<br />

phrase if the information in it does not directly affect the meaning<br />

of what comes before. In the following examples, each phrase does<br />

not do more than add additional information or commentary <strong>to</strong> the<br />

clause that precedes it.<br />

She got up <strong>to</strong> leave, having satisfac<strong>to</strong>rily reduced him <strong>to</strong> a quivering jelly.<br />

He leaped up from the exercise machine, promptly throwing his back out.<br />

We found her in the washroom, angrily scrubbing the ketchup off her tiara.<br />

<strong>The</strong>y s<strong>to</strong>od by the window, oblivious <strong>to</strong> the meteor shower raining past it.<br />

He pole-vaulted off the stage and over the fence, leaving his fans howling<br />

in frustration.<br />

<strong>The</strong> issue of how <strong>to</strong> deal with phrases and dependent clauses<br />

that lie within independent clauses, rather than before or after<br />

them, is addressed next.<br />

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