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PUNCTUATION<br />

Exception<br />

If both the independent clauses in a sentence are brief and simple,<br />

and there is no risk of ambiguity if a comma is not included, it can<br />

be acceptable <strong>to</strong> omit it. It's never wrong <strong>to</strong> include it, but sometimes<br />

you may think it overly formal or cluttering. Let the <strong>to</strong>ne and context<br />

of your writing <strong>guide</strong> your judgment as <strong>to</strong> whether a comma is really<br />

needed.<br />

This decision is final and there will be no discussion.<br />

<strong>The</strong> food was okay but the music was lousy.<br />

She begged him <strong>to</strong> stay so he did.<br />

DON'T USE A COMMA TO SEPARATE INDEPENDENT CLAUSES<br />

THAT ARE NOT LINKED BY A CONJUNCTION<br />

<strong>The</strong> <strong>punctuation</strong> in the following sentences is incorrect:<br />

<strong>The</strong> chairs and coffee tables were worth res<strong>to</strong>ring, the rest was rubbish.<br />

He stealthily parted the curtains, he looked inside.<br />

I think we'll be able <strong>to</strong> work <strong>to</strong>gether, you'd better start being more<br />

punctual though.<br />

You can bake them or fry them or steam them, there are various options.<br />

She could have taken on the task, nonetheless she decided not <strong>to</strong>.<br />

This type of construction is called a comma splice (splicing means<br />

<strong>to</strong> unite two things by fastening their ends <strong>to</strong>gether), and is an error<br />

because it sends a confusing signal. A comma is intended only for<br />

"light" separations, and sets up an expectation in the reader that<br />

whatever follows it will be closely related <strong>to</strong> what came before. Accordingly,<br />

the reader isn't anticipating the greater shift in direction that<br />

occurs, and may have <strong>to</strong> backtrack <strong>to</strong> make sense of the sentence.<br />

<strong>The</strong>re are three remedies for comma splices: Add a conjunction, break<br />

the clauses in<strong>to</strong> two sentences or use a semicolon instead of a comma.<br />

For a discussion of the last option, turn <strong>to</strong> page 93.<br />

Exception<br />

If a sentence is short and the style is casual, you can sometimes get<br />

away with a comma splice. It's never technically correct, but you<br />

may sometimes decide that a comma "feels" better than the more<br />

formal semicolon. It's a matter of context.<br />

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