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GRAMMATICALLY CORRECT
include (her collection comprises old playbills, movie magazines
and stage memorabilia). The parts constitute the whole; the whole
comprises the parts. Note: Merriam Webster's Collegiate Dictionary
permits the use of comprise as a synonym for constitute;
however, writers are advised to make the distinction.
Less than half the employees voted for the plan.
Should be fewer-not as many individual entities. Less should be
used only to refer to a smaller quantity of a single entity (my recipe
uses less sugar; the other route takes less time).
A large amount of dishes were broken when the shelf collapsed.
Should be number-the quantity of individual entities. Amount
should be used only to refer to how much there is of a single entity
(they do a great amount of business on weekends; what amount of
flour does this take).
The exam includes both a verbal and a written part.
Should be oral-spoken, as opposed to written. As used in the
above sense, verbal simply means involving words, so it would apply
equally to both oral and written modes. (One could properly say an
exam contained a verbal and a mathematics part, or a verbal and a
motor skills part.) Used in another sense, however, the word does
mean oral: for example, a verbal agreement as opposed to a written
one.
In each of the following sentences, a word is used in an ungrammatical
way.
Hopefully it won't be necessary for us to go to such extremes.
Should be We hope or It's to be hoped that. Strictly speaking,
hopefully means full of hope (hopefully, she looked through the job
ads; he went hopefully through the day's receipts). Certainly, the
use shown above is very common in speech, and some modern
authorities feel it should be viewed as legitimate since it doesn't
present any ambiguity and the alternatives often sound stiff. In
formal writing, however, it is advisable to avoid this usage-at least
for now. Another few years may see it gain full acceptability.
Errors like spelling mistakes make a resume look bad.
Should be such as-meaning that spelling mistakes are among the
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