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<strong>The</strong> following sentences contain squinting modifiers:<br />

GRAMMAR<br />

<strong>The</strong> gallery that was featured in the evening news recently had another<br />

major exhibit.<br />

<strong>The</strong> gallery was recently featured, or it recently had an exhibit?<br />

BETTER: <strong>The</strong> gallery that recently was featured in the evening news had<br />

another major exhibit.<br />

OR: <strong>The</strong> gallery that was featured in the news had another major exhibit<br />

recently.<br />

He liked immensely sugary desserts.<br />

He liked such desserts immensely, or he liked his desserts immensely<br />

sugary?<br />

BETTER: He had an immense liking for sugary desserts.<br />

OR: He liked desserts that were immensely sugary.<br />

<strong>The</strong> tramp being asked <strong>to</strong> leave nastily replied that he was within his<br />

rights <strong>to</strong> be there.<br />

Who was speaking nastily: the tramp or the person asking him<br />

<strong>to</strong> leave?<br />

BETTER: <strong>The</strong> tramp being asked <strong>to</strong> leave replied nastily that he was within<br />

his rights <strong>to</strong> be there.<br />

OR: Upon being asked nastily <strong>to</strong> leave, the tramp replied that he was<br />

within his rights <strong>to</strong> be there.<br />

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