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PUNCTUATION<br />

<strong>The</strong> commas in the following examples are incorrect, and should<br />

be removed.<br />

DON'T SPLIT THE SUBJECT AND PREDICATE<br />

Rodney and his brother, were the worst female impersona<strong>to</strong>rs we'd<br />

ever seen.<br />

DON'T SPLIT THE SUBJECT AND PREDICATE,<br />

EVEN IF THE PREDICATE COMES FIRST<br />

Discreetly nestled in the tissue paper, was a small plaster bust of Elvis.<br />

DON'T SPLIT THE VERB PART OF THE PREDICATE<br />

FROM THE REST<br />

What he likes best about the condominium is, its no-frogs policy.<br />

DON'T SPLIT A COMPOUND SUBJECT<br />

<strong>The</strong> desire <strong>to</strong> succeed, and the ability <strong>to</strong> do so are not the same thing.<br />

DON'T SPLIT THE TWO ACTIONS IN THE PREDICATE<br />

Lily s<strong>to</strong>mped down <strong>to</strong> her dungeon, and slammed the door.<br />

DON'T SPLIT THE TWO DESCRIPTIONS IN THE PREDICATE<br />

<strong>The</strong> meeting was brief, and <strong>to</strong> the point.<br />

DON'T SPLIT THE TWO ENTITIES AFFECTED BY THE ACTION<br />

Dudley planned <strong>to</strong> study astrophysics, and numerology.<br />

DON'T SPLIT THE TWO RECIPIENTS OF THE ACTION<br />

She lent her sister, and brother-in-law two thousand dollars.<br />

Exceptions<br />

Do put a comma within a clause if ambiguity would result without<br />

it. Consider the following sentences:<br />

<strong>The</strong> instruc<strong>to</strong>r gave out a sheet that described his course and explained<br />

how the grading would be done.<br />

She complained that he'd made a mess and s<strong>to</strong>rmed out in a snit.<br />

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