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Positioning Modifiers<br />

<strong>Correct</strong>ly<br />

A modifier is an element of a sentence that describes or qualifies<br />

some other element. Adjectives and adverbs are the most common<br />

modifiers (the leafy trees swayed gracefully in the tantalizingly<br />

cool breeze), but a phrase or dependent clause can act as one <strong>to</strong>o.<br />

You must ensure that all parts in a sentence are positioned so<br />

that any modifying element is acting upon what it is supposed <strong>to</strong>.<br />

Failure <strong>to</strong> do so may lead <strong>to</strong> some rather disconcerting results. <strong>The</strong>re<br />

are three types of problems <strong>to</strong> look out for:<br />

• Dangling modifiers<br />

• Misplaced modifiers<br />

• Squinting modifiers<br />

<strong>The</strong>se are described in turn below, followed by an exercise that<br />

presents examples of all three.<br />

DANGLING MODIFIERS<br />

If a sentence is carelessly constructed so that the entity <strong>to</strong> be<br />

modified is implied rather than explicitly stated, the modifier is left<br />

"dangling"-left at loose ends as it were-and in the absence of<br />

the intended "modify-ee" ends up latching on<strong>to</strong> whatever element<br />

happens <strong>to</strong> be in the appropriate position. <strong>The</strong> result is a nonsense<br />

sentence. <strong>The</strong> absurdities that result from dangling modifiers can<br />

range from the obvious <strong>to</strong> the subtle; the latter are more dangerous<br />

in that they're less easy <strong>to</strong> spot. English is a forgiving language, so<br />

even when syntax is garbled, readers will often process a sentence<br />

as the writer intended it.<br />

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