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GRAMMATICALLY CORRECT<br />

When the element closest <strong>to</strong> the verb is singular, some writers<br />

mistakenly make the verb agree with just that part. Consider the<br />

following examples:<br />

Her understanding and attention span has improved greatly.<br />

<strong>The</strong> verb should be have.<br />

Whether a relationship between these events actually exists and if so<br />

whether it is causal remains <strong>to</strong> be shown.<br />

<strong>The</strong> verb should be remain.<br />

Desk<strong>to</strong>p publishing may not yield the same quality achieved by<br />

traditional typesetting, but its cost-effectiveness and the control that it<br />

offers <strong>to</strong> edi<strong>to</strong>rs makes it attractive <strong>to</strong> many publishers.<br />

<strong>The</strong> verb should be make.<br />

Note that it is particularly easy <strong>to</strong> miss the fact that there is more<br />

than one subject if the elements are long, complex or abstract.<br />

Exceptions<br />

• If two elements refer <strong>to</strong> the same entity, treat them as if they<br />

constitute a single subject.<br />

Rum and Coke was his preferred drink.<br />

[rum and Coke combine <strong>to</strong> form one beverage]<br />

<strong>The</strong> president and CEO expects <strong>to</strong> attend.<br />

[president and CEO describe the same person]<br />

Drinking and driving ~a crime.<br />

[drinking and driving are not crimes in isolation, only in combination]<br />

Sometimes the status may be a matter of interpretation:<br />

Plucking and cleaning a chicken was an unpleasant task for many of our<br />

grandmothers.<br />

Calculating and plotting the points on a graph~ the most time­<br />

consuming part of the analysis.<br />

In each of these sentences, the closely related actions may be<br />

considered <strong>to</strong> function as a single activity. It would be grammatical<br />

<strong>to</strong> use plural verbs and change the descriptions <strong>to</strong> tasks and parts,<br />

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