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GRAMMATICALLY CORRECT<br />

words contain just one or two syllables, while many commonly used<br />

words are longer; similarly, a short sentence can pack in considerable<br />

complexity, and a lengthy one can be very easy <strong>to</strong> follow. <strong>The</strong><br />

reading-level <strong>to</strong>ols can be useful, but ultimately you must rely on<br />

common sense and intuition <strong>to</strong> ensure that you are writing in a way<br />

that your intended audience will understand.<br />

ENSURING THAT SENTENCE<br />

LENGTH IS APPROPRIATE<br />

What's the "right" length for a sentence? How long is <strong>to</strong>o long?<br />

306<br />

<strong>The</strong>re were equally excellent opportunities for vacationists in the<br />

home island, delightful sylvan spots for rejuvenation, offering a pleth­<br />

ora of attractions as well as a bracing <strong>to</strong>nic for the system in and<br />

around Dublin and its picturesque environs, even, Poulaphouca, <strong>to</strong><br />

which there was a steam tram, but also farther away from the madding<br />

crowd, in Wicklow, rightly termed the garden of Ireland, an ideal<br />

neighbourhood for elderly wheel men, so long as it didn't come down,<br />

and in the wilds of Donegal, where if report spoke true, the coup d'oeil<br />

was exceedingly grand, though the lastnamed locality was not easily<br />

getable so that the influx of visi<strong>to</strong>rs was not as yet all that it might be<br />

considering the signal benefits <strong>to</strong> be derived from it, while Howth with<br />

its his<strong>to</strong>ric associations and otherwise, Silken Thomas, Grace O'Malley,<br />

George IV, rhododendrons several hundred feet above sealevel was a<br />

favourite haunt with all sorts and conditions of men, especially in the<br />

spring when young men's fancy, though it had its own <strong>to</strong>ll of deaths<br />

by falling off the cliffs by design or accidentally, usually, by the way,<br />

on their left leg, it being only about three quarters of an hour's run<br />

from the pillar. [202 words]<br />

-jAMEs jovcE, Ulysses<br />

Now and then during the next six months he returned <strong>to</strong> <strong>to</strong>wn,<br />

but he did not again even see or pass the restaurant. ... Perhaps he<br />

did not need <strong>to</strong>. More often than that he knew perhaps thinking would<br />

have suddenly flowed in<strong>to</strong> a picture, shaping, shaped: the long, barren,<br />

somehow equivocal counter with the still, coldfaced, violenthaired<br />

woman at one end as though guarding it, and at the other men with

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