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Pat, like the others, was determined <strong>to</strong> finish on time.<br />

GRAMMAR<br />

A parcel, along with a multitude of letters, was delivered the next day.<br />

<strong>The</strong> house, with all its contents, was heavily insured.<br />

Anxiety about her health, in addition <strong>to</strong> her financial woes, has led her<br />

<strong>to</strong> seek counseling.<br />

Mitzi, accompanied by her husband, was trundling up the path.<br />

His perseverance, no less than his pleasant manner, makes him a credible<br />

candidate for the job.<br />

<strong>The</strong>ir country place, including the guest cottage, h worth about fifty<br />

thousand.<br />

<strong>The</strong> entire room, except the two side doors, h <strong>to</strong> be painted.<br />

Of course, if the subject preceding the parenthetical phrase is<br />

plural, the verb is plural. Just be sure <strong>to</strong> disregard the parenthetical<br />

text when determining the form of the verb.<br />

Note: <strong>The</strong> parenthetical phrases in the above examples are<br />

enclosed in commas. While technically these are proper, some writers<br />

may choose <strong>to</strong> drop them for reasons of style. If you omit the<br />

commas, this does not affect the rule described above: You would<br />

still disregard the parenthetical text as far as the verb is concerned.<br />

For example:<br />

<strong>The</strong> library as well as the chapel stands on a rolling green hill.<br />

A final word on these types of construction: <strong>The</strong>y may be correct,<br />

but there is no denying they sometimes sound awkward. You may<br />

in some cases want <strong>to</strong> consider joining the subjects with and instead.<br />

<strong>The</strong> professor and her graduate students were just entering the building.<br />

A parcel and a multitude of letters were delivered the next day.<br />

DISTRACTING MODIFYING NOUNS<br />

When a subject is followed by a phrase that further defines it, writers<br />

sometimes mistake the noun contained in this phrase for the subject<br />

itself. Consider the following three sentences:<br />

This seth not complete.<br />

<strong>The</strong>se instructions are not complete.<br />

This set of instructions h not complete.<br />

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