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GRAMMATICALLY CORRECT<br />

<strong>The</strong> critics hated it, the public loved it.<br />

I doubted she would show up, she was so unreliable.<br />

WHEN AN INDEPENDENT CLAUSE IS PRECEDED BY ANOTHER<br />

ELEMENT, PUT A COMMA AFTER THE INTRODUCTORY ELEMENT<br />

An independent clause may be preceded by a dependent clause, a<br />

phrase or a single word.<br />

DEPENDENT CLAUSES<br />

In the following examples, the dependent clause appears in italic<br />

type.<br />

Whenever you're ready <strong>to</strong> eat, the dining table will be cleared.<br />

Whenever you're ready <strong>to</strong> eat the pie, I'll take it out of the freezer.<br />

If you have finished, your wine waiter will be happy <strong>to</strong> make a suggestion<br />

for a digestive.<br />

If you have finished your wine, may I pour you some tea?<br />

Although I'd love <strong>to</strong> stay <strong>to</strong> help clean up, I just remembered nine urgent<br />

appointments.<br />

After the ceremony was over, the guests all leaped in<strong>to</strong> the hot tub.<br />

Because the weather was so bad, the Polar Bear Club held a special<br />

manda<strong>to</strong>ry swim.<br />

Since you insist, I'll let my eyebrows grow back in.<br />

When the phone finally rang, she hurled it out the window in a fit of pique.<br />

Why the need for a comma? Just as with two independent clauses,<br />

it may not always be immediately obvious from the syntax (word<br />

order) alone when the first clause has ended and the next has begun.<br />

For example, compare the first two examples above. In both cases,<br />

the comma signals when the end of the dependent clause has been<br />

reached-but this happens in different places. In the first case, the<br />

action of eating is unconnected <strong>to</strong> any object; here, the first clause<br />

is complete right after the verb eat. In the second case, the action<br />

of eating applies <strong>to</strong> an object (pie), and here the first clause is not<br />

complete until the recipient of the verb is identified. Suppose you<br />

omitted the comma in the first sentence:<br />

66<br />

Whenever you're ready <strong>to</strong> eat the dining table will be cleared.

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