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GRAMMATICALLY CORRECT<br />

Implied question: What was desperate about the situation?<br />

Answer: low supplies and imminent winter.<br />

One aspect struck him as particularly odd: It was midafternoon on a clear,<br />

mild day, yet the streets were <strong>to</strong>tally deserted.<br />

Implied question: What was odd? Answer: unaccountably deserted<br />

streets.<br />

<strong>The</strong>re's an issue that we absolutely must address: Will our current level<br />

of funding be enough?<br />

Implied question: What's this issue? Answer: whether funding is<br />

sufficient.<br />

<strong>The</strong> text preceding a colon should be a complete independent<br />

clause. Do not put a colon after a sentence fragment-a phrase or<br />

a dependent clause-that would dangle awkwardly on its own. <strong>The</strong><br />

colons in the following examples are incorrect, and should be<br />

removed:<br />

In a word, the plan was: ridiculous.<br />

When they looked at the design more closely: the flaws became evident.<br />

From the <strong>to</strong>p of the hill: the entire scene could be surveyed.<br />

You can sometimes get away with putting a colon after a sentence<br />

fragment, provided it's one that wouldn't sound unreasonable standing<br />

on its own. (Experienced writers have a sense of when sentence<br />

fragments would be acceptable, and will occasionally use them for<br />

effect. See page 59.)<br />

A word of caution: Testing has not yet been completed, so any results<br />

must be considered preliminary.<br />

Implied question: What's there <strong>to</strong> be cautious about? Answer:<br />

preliminary results.<br />

So far so good: As we had hoped, the results supported our hypothesis.<br />

Implied question: What was good? Answer: affirming results.<br />

<strong>The</strong> text following the colon does not have <strong>to</strong> be an independent<br />

clause.<br />

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