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GRAMMATICALLY CORRECT<br />

Subsequently, the negotiations broke down.<br />

In short, the trip was a resounding success.<br />

His feelings were hurt, understandably.<br />

It was my best performance ever, in fact.<br />

<strong>The</strong> presentation, however, was an embarrassing calamity.<br />

<strong>The</strong> meeting, therefore, was canceled.<br />

As introduc<strong>to</strong>ry elements, these words can appear either at the<br />

beginning of a sentence, <strong>to</strong> link it with an earlier one, or at the<br />

beginning of a second clause, <strong>to</strong> link it with the first. In the latter<br />

case, separating the clauses with a comma would create the error<br />

known as a comma splice (see page 65), and the reader might<br />

have a fleeting uncertainty as <strong>to</strong> whether the conjunctive word is a<br />

concluding element <strong>to</strong> the first clause or the opener <strong>to</strong> the next.<br />

Accordingly, the stronger separation of the semicolon is needed.<br />

I'd rather have the report by <strong>to</strong>morrow; however, Monday will do.<br />

He didn't think he'd have anything <strong>to</strong> contribute <strong>to</strong> the meeting; besides,<br />

he wasn't interested in the <strong>to</strong>pic.<br />

Max finally showed up two hours late; understandably, he met with a<br />

frosty reception.<br />

She thought she was early; in fact, she was the last <strong>to</strong> arrive.<br />

We waited and waited; eventually, we gave up.<br />

No progress was evident; nevertheless, they persevered.<br />

A final comment on the use of these conjunction-like words: Some<br />

are very similar <strong>to</strong> actual conjunctions. For example:<br />

<strong>The</strong> argument was going nowhere, so we decided <strong>to</strong> drop it.<br />

<strong>The</strong> argument was going nowhere; hence, we decided <strong>to</strong> drop it.<br />

<strong>The</strong> apartment was small and dark, but the price was right.<br />

<strong>The</strong> apartment was small and dark; however, the price was right.<br />

<strong>The</strong>se is <strong>essential</strong>ly no difference in meaning between these pairs<br />

of sentences. <strong>The</strong> ones with commas tend <strong>to</strong> look a bit more casual;<br />

the ones with semicolons, a bit more formal. When either way would<br />

do, your choice should depend on the <strong>to</strong>ne of your writing. No single<br />

style is the most appropriate for every situation.<br />

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