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Dissertation - World Federation of Music Therapy

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24. The framework for the qualitative study (p. 165):<br />

I certainly chose the framework for the qualitative study. What is meant is just that six case<br />

studies would have meant another 60-80 pages, and the ‘framework’ <strong>of</strong> the dissertation was<br />

already filled out.<br />

25. “Experience” and “Effect” in the same research question:<br />

As stated above, I have second thoughts about the formulation <strong>of</strong> subquestion 4; I think<br />

“effects” should have been replaced or complemented by “influence(s)”. This also goes for<br />

page 166; “effects” is not used anywhere else in the section (p. 165-177), and in the<br />

conclusion “influence” is actually used instead <strong>of</strong> “effect”. However, the word “outcome(s)”<br />

is also used (p. 168 and 177), and in principle the same critique could be raised against the use<br />

<strong>of</strong> this word. I would like to elaborate this issue a little. As can be seen from the interview<br />

guide and the corresponding Table 6.1, neither “effects” nor “outcome” were used when<br />

formulating the questions in the interviews. I wanted the participants to report their<br />

experiences <strong>of</strong> core elements in the therapeutic process, not to reflect on “causes” and<br />

“effects”. However, I also wanted the participants to reflect on the personal “outcome” (c: real<br />

life consequences <strong>of</strong> their BMGIM process, and this is reflected in the core categories and the<br />

grounded theory formulated in section 7.4. The problem here is that “The influence <strong>of</strong><br />

BMGIM on mood and quality <strong>of</strong> life” was addressed both quantitatively (based on the<br />

questionnaires and reported as effects) and qualitatively (based on the interviews and reported<br />

as core categories). I wanted the participants not only to talk about their experiences, but also<br />

to comment on the “effects” documented in the (preliminary results <strong>of</strong> the) descriptive<br />

statistics. This is discussed in section 9.4.1, and it was not only very interesting to hear the<br />

participants’ comments on these “effects”; the “effects” had also the function <strong>of</strong> cues to<br />

discuss which elements <strong>of</strong> mood and QoL the participants considered appropriate and<br />

measurable.<br />

26. Redundancy in the presentation <strong>of</strong> research methods (Chapter 4 and 6):<br />

The reader will note a certain amount <strong>of</strong> duplications, especially between chapters 4 and 6 –<br />

and again in chapter 9. I acknowledge the resulting redundancy, however I deliberately chose<br />

to include the duplications, in order to guide the reader firmly through the many procedural

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