constructing pathways to translation - Higher Education Commission

3. Compensation by Merging
ST. p: 17.
As his imagination went forward to a fight, there was hedious possibilities.He
contemplated the lurking menaces of the future, and failed in an effort to see himself
standing stoutly in the midst of them. He recalled his vision of broken bladed glory, but
the shadow of the impending tumult, he suspected them to be impossible pictures.
TT. p:23.
Jb us ney larrae ka tassawar bandha to kuch khofnaak imkanaat bhi usey nazar aye.
Mustaqbil mein mundlatey howe khatoron ka us ney tassawwar bandha aur un khatroon
key samney datt kar kharrey honey ka tasawwar hi tassawar mein koshish ki magar uski
koshish nakam hoei.
The last two sentence of the ST have been merged into a signle sentence conveying the
same thought of the author by the translator.
ST. p:12.
His busy mind had drawn for him large pictures extravagant in colour, lurid with
breathless deeds.
TT . p:13.
Us ney barray barray naqshey jamaein they. Ye naqshey khooni markoon aur jan
jokhoon key karnamoon say labriez they.
4. Compensation by Splitting
1. ST.p:123.
They were like critical shepherds struggling with sheep
TT. p:246.
Inki halat bherriyoon ko ghier cheep kar hankneiy waley gudarriyoon si ho rahi thi.
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